Into The Hollow

The Valley of Ashes fills with howling wind.
Stepping from the Thunder Road,
The traveller follows a path eastward.

The sky grows darker.
The landscape becomes swamp-like.
Small islands of dead reeds
Scatter the black waters.

The path itself submerges at intervals,
And deep mud soon cakes the traveller’s feet.
Each step grows heavier.
The path becomes harder to follow.

Then, without warning,
The traveller sinks.
Head tilted back,
Face raised above the mire,
They struggle.

The cold mud squeezes the air
From their lungs.
White lights bloom
At the edges of vision.

Then darkness.
And they sink silently
Into the black swamp.
They awaken with a gasp.
The memory of drowning remains vivid.

A dim orange glow flickers nearby.
The ceiling hangs so low
They must crawl.
Mud coats the floor.
Damp walls glisten.
The smell of smoke
Draws them forward.

The tunnel widens.
A vast cavern opens before them.

At its centre,
A roaring fire burns
Within a circle of stone.

Beyond the fire,
A sleek feminine creature lays on their belly,
Nestled on a straw bed,
Its body is smooth, naked and shining,
It’s skin reflects light like white glass.

“You’ve awakened” it whispers,
The creature’s arms and feet end
In thorny vines that bury themselves in the mud,
Its head appears to be reptilian, long lizard like,
“why do you enter my realm?”
It whispers as a long grey tongue
Laps at the air briefly,
It shifts its weight to receive the answer,
Unknowingly exposing three sets of breasts,

“I’m a traveller,” the walker replies.
The creature’s pale eyes narrowed thoughtfully.
“A traveller,” it whispered. “They all say that.”

Its long grey tongue flicked briefly through the smoke.
“They arrive afraid. Confused. Angry. Proud.
But always believing themselves separate from the fate that waits for all things.”


The traveller glanced toward the fire.
“What is this place?”

The creature shifted slightly, the vines rooted in the mud tightening.
“This is The Hollow.”
“Those who venture here must learn a lesson before they are permitted to continue. through the valley”
“What lesson?”


The creature smiled.
“That they will die.”

The words hung heavily in the cavern.
The traveller said nothing.
“You sank beneath the mud because all things sink eventually. Stone crumbles. Trees rot. Rivers dry. Kingdoms vanish. Flesh fails.”

The creature slowly extended one clawed hand toward the flames.
“The mud is not punishment. It is remembrance.”
The fire crackled.
“I drown travellers so they may feel the shape of their ending.”

The traveller’s stomach tightened.
“I died?”

“No.”
The creature shook its head.
“You experienced the fear of it.”
The flames reflected from its glass-like skin.

“Most spend their waking lives running from the inevitable.
They build walls around the thought.
They pretend they are exempt.”

The creature’s eyes fixed upon the traveller.
“But the road ahead cannot be walked by those who refuse to acknowledge what waits at its end.”
The traveller sat quietly.
The cavern seemed impossibly still.
“And what happens if I refuse?”
“Then you remain.”
“Forever?”
The creature smiled again.
“No.”
Its smile widened slightly.
“Nothing remains forever.”

The traveller stared into the fire.
They thought of the swamp.
The helpless sinking.
The crushing pressure.
The panic.
The certainty that everything was ending.
Then they thought of every path they had walked.

Every dream.
Every memory.
Every person they had known.
All temporary.
All precious because they would not last.

Slowly, the traveller nodded.
“I understand.”
The creature tilted its head.

“Do you?”
“I think so.”
“Then tell me.”
The traveller considered carefully.
“The path drowns travellers because death cannot be avoided.”

The creature remained silent.
“The fear comes from fighting it.”
Still the creature watched.

“The road isn’t teaching us how to die.”
The traveller looked into the flames.
“It’s teaching us how to live despite knowing we will.”
For the first time, the creature seemed pleased
The vines around its limbs loosened.
The fire burned brighter.
“Very good.”
The traveller exhaled slowly.

“So I may leave?”
“You may.”

The creature settled back upon its straw bed.
“But first, you must satisfy my curiosity.”
The traveller frowned.
“What curiosity?”
The creature’s eyes gleamed.
“I wish to know whether you truly accept your fate.”
“And how do I prove that?”

The creature smiled.
“With a kiss.”
The traveller stared.
The creature simply waited.
The cavern fell silent once more.

Finally, the traveller rose and approached.
The fire’s heat washed over them.
The creature lowered its head.
The traveller leaned forward.
And kissed it.

Instantly, the creature’s vast mouth opened impossibly wide.
Rows of pale teeth unfolded from the darkness.
Before the traveller could react, they were swallowed whole.

Darkness consumed everything.
Then motion.
The traveller slid downward through a slick tunnel filled with warm milky-white fluid.
The descent accelerated.
Faster.
Faster.
The tunnel twisted sharply.
Then vanished.
The traveller fell.

Moments later they plunged into a vast pool of the same pale liquid.
The impact drove them deep beneath the surface.
Silence surrounded them.
Weightless.
Drifting.
Then they kicked upward.
Breaking through the surface with a gasp.

As the fluid streamed from their face, something felt different.
The fear that had gripped them in the swamp was gone.
The panic had dissolved.
Only understanding remained.
The white pool faded.
The cavern disappeared.
The fire vanished.
The world dissolved.
The traveller opened their eyes.

They were lying once again upon the Thunder Road.
Grey clouds drifted overhead.
The howling wind carried ash across the landscape.
Slowly they stood.
Then turned and followed the road back to the crossroads.

The Path Keeper was waiting exactly where they had left him.
The old figure regarded the traveller silently.
“You returned.”
“I did.”
“And what did you find?”
The traveller told the tale.
Of the swamp.
The drowning mud.
The cavern.
The creature.
The lesson hidden beneath the fear.
When they finished, the Path Keeper nodded.

“Then the road served its purpose.”
The traveller looked toward the remaining paths stretching into the distance.
“What was the creature called?”
The Path Keeper smiled faintly.
“Some call her Ash-Mother.”
“Others call her the Keeper of Endings.”

He glanced toward the eastern horizon.
“But names matter little.”
The traveller nodded.
Then turned toward another road.
This one stretching westward.
Without hesitation, they stepped forward.

And continued their journey.


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